Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Feedback from first cut


After editing the footage we had in time with the song and what we had figured out from our shooting script we showed it to the rest of our class to gain some feedback. They knew that it was to be a first cut and all of the footage was not expected to be edited yet.
We found that some of the people in our class said that they liked the isolated location; I am glad that they picked up on this, as it is a key idea within our music video. The isolated location links with the idea that they have both isolated each other by being in the relationship. It also makes the audience realise that for there to be a sense of equilibrium at the end then they must go there separate ways.

Monday, October 15, 2012

Rough Cut



Above is our first rough cut which we showed to the rest of our class in order to get some general feedback. Overall the feedback was general positive with some alterations taking place which i will analyse in another post. As it is seen in this video there has not been any transitions put into the video footage is missing this was all explained to the class before hand and the bits where footage is missing it was explained what was going to be going there.