1st draft of ancillary product

This is our 1st draft of the magazine advert; I personally like this idea of the separation which was part of our initial idea as it shows a clear separation between the two actors (which are both in the video). As a group we saw the line near to the left as a problem as it doesn’t fade like the bottom of the poster does. I personal like this line as it is more on the males side showing the dominance of the female character. I believe it also shows that the split up as shown in the video was down to the male character and makes the audience sympathise with the woman on the left.